[Futuregen] Fwd: Draft of Review paper

[Selma Kadi]

Dear Erika et al,

thanks for the draft of the review paper which is already really 
interesting to read. I've added a couple more comments, mainly regarding 
the way the argument is set up in the introduction and two in the 
methods and results section.

Best wishes,

Selma

Am 18.02.2021 um 09:38 schrieb Ricardo Rodrigues:
> Dear 'Swedish team',
>
> Thank you very much for this again.
> I added my comments to the document circulated by Stefania, please see 
> the attachment.
>
> I think this is shaping up nicely and you found a very clear way to 
> convey the results with the disaggregation you use. I kept my inputs 
> mostly to higher level comments as I think these would be more helpful 
> to you at this stage.
> If anything is not clear, we can discuss it further today during the 
> meeting.
>
> Best wishes,
> Ricardo
>
> On 17/02/2021 14:59, Stefania Ilinca wrote:
>>
>> Dear Erika, dear all,
>>
>> Please see attached with a few general comments from my side. My 
>> biggest concern is that it's not clear to me after reading through 
>> what are the 2-3 key findings from this review. There are a lot of 
>> numbers presented but I wasn't sure I knew more at the end of the 
>> results section than I knew at the end of the intro. My suggestion is 
>> to formulate these key take away points, build hints to them in the 
>> introduction, highlight each in the results (rather than describing 
>> teh results of the reviewed studies) and pick them up in a future 
>> draft of the discussion.
>>
>> I was also wondering if there is some sort of quality of evidence 
>> ranking you can propose, depending on how strong the design of each 
>> study is and how well adapted the analytical approach. You mention 
>> the extremely wide estimate intervals in the studies you review - 
>> that undermines the credibility of any conclusions you might draw in 
>> this paper. But if not all studies included are created equal, it 
>> would be useful to point to those estimates that are more reliable.
>>
>> I hope this can be helpful and I look forward to discussing further,
>>
>> Stefania
>>
>>
>> On 15/02/2021 18:15, Ricardo Rodrigues wrote:
>>>
>>> Dear all,
>>>
>>> As you realized, I included you all in my reply to Erika so I may as 
>>> well circulate already the draft that Erika sent me before. Sorry 
>>> for this.:)
>>>
>>> Erika, give it a try the next time using the futuregen mailing list 
>>> as you should be able to also send these e-mails.
>>>
>>> The agenda for the meeting will follow soon.
>>>
>>> Best wishes,
>>>
>>> Ricardo
>>>
>>>
>>> -------- Forwarded Message --------
>>> Subject: 	Draft of Review paper
>>> Date: 	Mon, 15 Feb 2021 16:33:49 +0000
>>> From: 	Erika Augustsson <erika.augustsson at ki.se>
>>> To: 	rodrigues at euro.centre.org <rodrigues at euro.centre.org>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Hi Ricardo,
>>>
>>> I have the first draft for the review paper which I was going to 
>>> send out just now when I realised I’m not sure how to reach everyone 
>>> in the group. Would you be able to forward it on to everyone or let 
>>> me know how I can best send it out?
>>>
>>> See you at the meeting on Thursday!
>>>
>>> Best wishes,
>>>
>>> Erika
>>>
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