[Futuregen] Fwd: Draft of Review paper

Thu Feb 18 11:52:06 CET 2021

Dear Erika, dear all,

I had glanced through yesterday and thought I would save comments for 
the discussion today, but opted to include my comments in light of my 
colleagues' feedback already.

I didn't want to replicate any of the useful comments my colleagues had 
already provided, so my limited comments regard clarifications and 
elaboration within the methods section.

Best regards,
Cassandra

On 2021-02-18 10:46 a.m., Selma Kadi wrote:
>
> Dear Erika et al,
>
> thanks for the draft of the review paper which is already really 
> interesting to read. I've added a couple more comments, mainly 
> regarding the way the argument is set up in the introduction and two 
> in the methods and results section.
>
> Best wishes,
>
> Selma
>
> Am 18.02.2021 um 09:38 schrieb Ricardo Rodrigues:
>> Dear 'Swedish team',
>>
>> Thank you very much for this again.
>> I added my comments to the document circulated by Stefania, please 
>> see the attachment.
>>
>> I think this is shaping up nicely and you found a very clear way to 
>> convey the results with the disaggregation you use. I kept my inputs 
>> mostly to higher level comments as I think these would be more 
>> helpful to you at this stage.
>> If anything is not clear, we can discuss it further today during the 
>> meeting.
>>
>> Best wishes,
>> Ricardo
>>
>> On 17/02/2021 14:59, Stefania Ilinca wrote:
>>>
>>> Dear Erika, dear all,
>>>
>>> Please see attached with a few general comments from my side. My 
>>> biggest concern is that it's not clear to me after reading through 
>>> what are the 2-3 key findings from this review. There are a lot of 
>>> numbers presented but I wasn't sure I knew more at the end of the 
>>> results section than I knew at the end of the intro. My suggestion 
>>> is to formulate these key take away points, build hints to them in 
>>> the introduction, highlight each in the results (rather than 
>>> describing teh results of the reviewed studies) and pick them up in 
>>> a future draft of the discussion.
>>>
>>> I was also wondering if there is some sort of quality of evidence 
>>> ranking you can propose, depending on how strong the design of each 
>>> study is and how well adapted the analytical approach. You mention 
>>> the extremely wide estimate intervals in the studies you review - 
>>> that undermines the credibility of any conclusions you might draw in 
>>> this paper. But if not all studies included are created equal, it 
>>> would be useful to point to those estimates that are more reliable.
>>>
>>> I hope this can be helpful and I look forward to discussing further,
>>>
>>> Stefania
>>>
>>>
>>> On 15/02/2021 18:15, Ricardo Rodrigues wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Dear all,
>>>>
>>>> As you realized, I included you all in my reply to Erika so I may 
>>>> as well circulate already the draft that Erika sent me before. 
>>>> Sorry for this.:)
>>>>
>>>> Erika, give it a try the next time using the futuregen mailing list 
>>>> as you should be able to also send these e-mails.
>>>>
>>>> The agenda for the meeting will follow soon.
>>>>
>>>> Best wishes,
>>>>
>>>> Ricardo
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> -------- Forwarded Message --------
>>>> Subject: 	Draft of Review paper
>>>> Date: 	Mon, 15 Feb 2021 16:33:49 +0000
>>>> From: 	Erika Augustsson <erika.augustsson at ki.se>
>>>> To: 	rodrigues at euro.centre.org <rodrigues at euro.centre.org>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Hi Ricardo,
>>>>
>>>> I have the first draft for the review paper which I was going to 
>>>> send out just now when I realised I’m not sure how to reach 
>>>> everyone in the group. Would you be able to forward it on to 
>>>> everyone or let me know how I can best send it out?
>>>>
>>>> See you at the meeting on Thursday!
>>>>
>>>> Best wishes,
>>>>
>>>> Erika
>>>>
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