[Futuregen] Fwd: Draft of Review paper

[Ricardo Rodrigues]

Dear 'Swedish team',

Thank you very much for this again.
I added my comments to the document circulated by Stefania, please see 
the attachment.

I think this is shaping up nicely and you found a very clear way to 
convey the results with the disaggregation you use. I kept my inputs 
mostly to higher level comments as I think these would be more helpful 
to you at this stage.
If anything is not clear, we can discuss it further today during the 
meeting.

Best wishes,
Ricardo

On 17/02/2021 14:59, Stefania Ilinca wrote:
>
> Dear Erika, dear all,
>
> Please see attached with a few general comments from my side. My 
> biggest concern is that it's not clear to me after reading through 
> what are the 2-3 key findings from this review. There are a lot of 
> numbers presented but I wasn't sure I knew more at the end of the 
> results section than I knew at the end of the intro. My suggestion is 
> to formulate these key take away points, build hints to them in the 
> introduction, highlight each in the results (rather than describing 
> teh results of the reviewed studies) and pick them up in a future 
> draft of the discussion.
>
> I was also wondering if there is some sort of quality of evidence 
> ranking you can propose, depending on how strong the design of each 
> study is and how well adapted the analytical approach. You mention the 
> extremely wide estimate intervals in the studies you review - that 
> undermines the credibility of any conclusions you might draw in this 
> paper. But if not all studies included are created equal, it would be 
> useful to point to those estimates that are more reliable.
>
> I hope this can be helpful and I look forward to discussing further,
>
> Stefania
>
>
> On 15/02/2021 18:15, Ricardo Rodrigues wrote:
>>
>> Dear all,
>>
>> As you realized, I included you all in my reply to Erika so I may as 
>> well circulate already the draft that Erika sent me before. Sorry for 
>> this.:)
>>
>> Erika, give it a try the next time using the futuregen mailing list 
>> as you should be able to also send these e-mails.
>>
>> The agenda for the meeting will follow soon.
>>
>> Best wishes,
>>
>> Ricardo
>>
>>
>> -------- Forwarded Message --------
>> Subject: 	Draft of Review paper
>> Date: 	Mon, 15 Feb 2021 16:33:49 +0000
>> From: 	Erika Augustsson <erika.augustsson at ki.se>
>> To: 	rodrigues at euro.centre.org <rodrigues at euro.centre.org>
>>
>>
>>
>> Hi Ricardo,
>>
>> I have the first draft for the review paper which I was going to send 
>> out just now when I realised I’m not sure how to reach everyone in 
>> the group. Would you be able to forward it on to everyone or let me 
>> know how I can best send it out?
>>
>> See you at the meeting on Thursday!
>>
>> Best wishes,
>>
>> Erika
>>
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