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<p>Dear Erika et al,</p>
<p>thanks for the draft of the review paper which is already really
interesting to read. I've added a couple more comments, mainly
regarding the way the argument is set up in the introduction and
two in the methods and results section. <br>
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<p>Best wishes, <br>
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<p>Selma<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Am 18.02.2021 um 09:38 schrieb Ricardo
Rodrigues:<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Dear 'Swedish team',<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Thank you very much for this again.</div>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">I added my comments to the document
circulated by Stefania, please see the attachment.</div>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">I think this is shaping up nicely and
you found a very clear way to convey the results with the
disaggregation you use. I kept my inputs mostly to higher level
comments as I think these would be more helpful to you at this
stage.</div>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">If anything is not clear, we can
discuss it further today during the meeting. <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Best wishes,</div>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Ricardo<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 17/02/2021 14:59, Stefania Ilinca
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<p>Dear Erika, dear all, <br>
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<p>Please see attached with a few general comments from my side.
My biggest concern is that it's not clear to me after reading
through what are the 2-3 key findings from this review. There
are a lot of numbers presented but I wasn't sure I knew more
at the end of the results section than I knew at the end of
the intro. My suggestion is to formulate these key take away
points, build hints to them in the introduction, highlight
each in the results (rather than describing teh results of the
reviewed studies) and pick them up in a future draft of the
discussion. <br>
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<p>I was also wondering if there is some sort of quality of
evidence ranking you can propose, depending on how strong the
design of each study is and how well adapted the analytical
approach. You mention the extremely wide estimate intervals in
the studies you review - that undermines the credibility of
any conclusions you might draw in this paper. But if not all
studies included are created equal, it would be useful to
point to those estimates that are more reliable.</p>
<p>I hope this can be helpful and I look forward to discussing
further, <br>
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<p>Stefania</p>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 15/02/2021 18:15, Ricardo
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<p>Dear all,</p>
<p>As you realized, I included you all in my reply to Erika so
I may as well circulate already the draft that Erika sent me
before. Sorry for this.:)</p>
<p>Erika, give it a try the next time using the futuregen
mailing list as you should be able to also send these
e-mails. <br>
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<p>The agenda for the meeting will follow soon.</p>
<p>Best wishes,</p>
<p>Ricardo<br>
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