[Futuregen] Cohort paper

Sun Sep 27 14:20:25 CEST 2020

Dear Stefan and Johan,

Attached the document with a few additions form my side. I tried not to 
replicate any of the previous comments and made mostly punctual 
suggestions.

On the issue of simplifying the story line I can think of two 
potentially helpful approaches:

- focus on either ADL or IADL and report the other only when there is a 
marked difference

- add to the intro a short statement of the research questions or 
specific study objectives that can structure your presentation of results.

I would suggest focusing on comparison of trends within regions rather 
than comparison between regions, mostly because I am concerned about the 
data quality. I think this is partly Ricardo's suggestion as well but 
based on a different argumentation.

I hope this can help. You certainly have a great paper already.

My best regards,

Stefania

On 25-Sep-20 1:51 PM, Janet Jull wrote:
> Hi Stefan and Johan,
> Some comments for you to consider!
> best wishes, Janet
>
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> *From:* Futuregen <futuregen-bounces at euro.centre.org> on behalf of 
> Ricardo Rodrigues <rodrigues at euro.centre.org>
> *Sent:* September 24, 2020 4:43 AM
> *To:* futuregen at euro.centre.org <futuregen at euro.centre.org>
> *Subject:* Re: [Futuregen] Cohort paper
> Dear Stefan and Johan,
>
> I'm also sending my comments in the document attached.
>
> Four main points from my side:
> i) I really like the paper/results and I find it very interesting. 
> It's the kind of analysis that makes me want to know more. The 
> geographical disaggregation is a great addition.
> ii) As I mentioned in the zoom, maybe focus throughout on the 
> sex/gender differences as the main focus and entry point to the 
> analysis and use specific male/female trajectories to make sense of 
> the sex/gender differences.
> iii) Not sure I agree with all the proposed conclusions as for me 
> there are some cohort changes also for men in N&WE (even if they 
> appear only in the younger groups within each cohort). Is there any 
> way to establish whether there is a cohort change analytically rather 
> than using the eye "test alone"?
> iv) I think the evolution of women in EE is particularly interesting 
> as it contradicts a bit the usual mortality selection argument: men 
> are no the ones catching up as their life expectancy improves, but 
> women are becoming healthier in this region. Effects of access to 
> education (which could explain - perhaps - why we don't see the same 
> effect in SE, where women of these cohorts might still be faced with 
> difficulties in access to education)? Looking at the countries that 
> make up each cluster, N&W Europe - with lower sex/gender differences) 
> are also all rich countries. Something about the general level of 
> material development leveling country differences?
>
> Thanks a lot again for this and happy to discuss further.
>
> Best wishes,
> Ricardo
>
> On 23/09/2020 16:45, Selma Kadi wrote:
>>
>> Dear Stefan and Johan,
>>
>> I've added some comments to the cohort-manuscript,
>>
>> best wishes,
>>
>> Selma
>>
>> Am 14.09.2020 um 11:00 schrieb Stefan Fors:
>>>
>>>     Dear all,
>>>
>>>     It just struck me that I probably forgot to circulate the
>>>     ‘cohort-mansucript’ with Susan’s comments. So, if you’ve already
>>>     commented in another version – no need to comment in this as
>>>     well, just send it as it is and I’ll fuse the comments.
>>>
>>>     All the best,
>>>
>>>     Stefan
>>>
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