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<p>Dear Stefan and Johan, <br>
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<p>Attached the document with a few additions form my side. I tried
not to replicate any of the previous comments and made mostly
punctual suggestions. <br>
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<p>On the issue of simplifying the story line I can think of two
potentially helpful approaches:</p>
<p>- focus on either ADL or IADL and report the other only when
there is a marked difference <br>
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<p>- add to the intro a short statement of the research questions or
specific study objectives that can structure your presentation of
results. <br>
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<p>I would suggest focusing on comparison of trends within regions
rather than comparison between regions, mostly because I am
concerned about the data quality. I think this is partly Ricardo's
suggestion as well but based on a different argumentation.</p>
<p>I hope this can help. You certainly have a great paper already.</p>
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<p>My best regards, <br>
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<p>Stefania<br>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">Dear Stefan and Johan,</div>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">I'm also sending my comments in
the document attached.</div>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">Four main points from my side:</div>
<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">i) I really like the
paper/results and I find it very interesting. It's the kind of
analysis that makes me want to know more. The geographical
disaggregation is a great addition.</div>
<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">ii) As I mentioned in the zoom,
maybe focus throughout on the sex/gender differences as the
main focus and entry point to the analysis and use specific
male/female trajectories to make sense of the sex/gender
differences.</div>
<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">iii) Not sure I agree with all
the proposed conclusions as for me there are some cohort
changes also for men in N&WE (even if they appear only in
the younger groups within each cohort). Is there any way to
establish whether there is a cohort change analytically rather
than using the eye "test alone"?<br>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">iv) I think the evolution of
women in EE is particularly interesting as it contradicts a
bit the usual mortality selection argument: men are no the
ones catching up as their life expectancy improves, but women
are becoming healthier in this region. Effects of access to
education (which could explain - perhaps - why we don't see
the same effect in SE, where women of these cohorts might
still be faced with difficulties in access to education)?
Looking at the countries that make up each cluster, N&W
Europe - with lower sex/gender differences) are also all rich
countries. Something about the general level of material
development leveling country differences?<br>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">Thanks a lot again for this and
happy to discuss further.</div>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">Best wishes,</div>
<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">Ricardo<br>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">On 23/09/2020 16:45, Selma Kadi
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<p>I've added some comments to the cohort-manuscript,<br>
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<p>best wishes, <br>
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<div class="x_moz-cite-prefix">Am 14.09.2020 um 11:00 schrieb
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