[Futuregen] Fwd: Draft of Review paper

[Stefania Ilinca]

Dear Erika, dear all,

Please see attached with a few general comments from my side. My biggest 
concern is that it's not clear to me after reading through what are the 
2-3 key findings from this review. There are a lot of numbers presented 
but I wasn't sure I knew more at the end of the results section than I 
knew at the end of the intro. My suggestion is to formulate these key 
take away points, build hints to them in the introduction, highlight 
each in the results (rather than describing teh results of the reviewed 
studies) and pick them up in a future draft of the discussion.

I was also wondering if there is some sort of quality of evidence 
ranking you can propose, depending on how strong the design of each 
study is and how well adapted the analytical approach. You mention the 
extremely wide estimate intervals in the studies you review - that 
undermines the credibility of any conclusions you might draw in this 
paper. But if not all studies included are created equal, it would be 
useful to point to those estimates that are more reliable.

I hope this can be helpful and I look forward to discussing further,

Stefania


On 15/02/2021 18:15, Ricardo Rodrigues wrote:
>
> Dear all,
>
> As you realized, I included you all in my reply to Erika so I may as 
> well circulate already the draft that Erika sent me before. Sorry for 
> this.:)
>
> Erika, give it a try the next time using the futuregen mailing list as 
> you should be able to also send these e-mails.
>
> The agenda for the meeting will follow soon.
>
> Best wishes,
>
> Ricardo
>
>
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject: 	Draft of Review paper
> Date: 	Mon, 15 Feb 2021 16:33:49 +0000
> From: 	Erika Augustsson <erika.augustsson at ki.se>
> To: 	rodrigues at euro.centre.org <rodrigues at euro.centre.org>
>
>
>
> Hi Ricardo,
>
> I have the first draft for the review paper which I was going to send 
> out just now when I realised I’m not sure how to reach everyone in the 
> group. Would you be able to forward it on to everyone or let me know 
> how I can best send it out?
>
> See you at the meeting on Thursday!
>
> Best wishes,
>
> Erika
>
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