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<p>Dear Erika, dear all, <br>
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<p>Please see attached with a few general comments from my side. My
biggest concern is that it's not clear to me after reading through
what are the 2-3 key findings from this review. There are a lot of
numbers presented but I wasn't sure I knew more at the end of the
results section than I knew at the end of the intro. My suggestion
is to formulate these key take away points, build hints to them in
the introduction, highlight each in the results (rather than
describing teh results of the reviewed studies) and pick them up
in a future draft of the discussion. <br>
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<p>I was also wondering if there is some sort of quality of evidence
ranking you can propose, depending on how strong the design of
each study is and how well adapted the analytical approach. You
mention the extremely wide estimate intervals in the studies you
review - that undermines the credibility of any conclusions you
might draw in this paper. But if not all studies included are
created equal, it would be useful to point to those estimates that
are more reliable.</p>
<p>I hope this can be helpful and I look forward to discussing
further, <br>
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<p>Stefania</p>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 15/02/2021 18:15, Ricardo Rodrigues
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<p>Dear all,</p>
<p>As you realized, I included you all in my reply to Erika so I
may as well circulate already the draft that Erika sent me
before. Sorry for this.:)</p>
<p>Erika, give it a try the next time using the futuregen mailing
list as you should be able to also send these e-mails. <br>
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<p>The agenda for the meeting will follow soon.</p>
<p>Best wishes,</p>
<p>Ricardo<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Ricardo,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">I have the first draft
for the review paper which I was going to send out just
now when I realised I’m not sure how to reach everyone in
the group. Would you be able to forward it on to everyone
or let me know how I can best send it out?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">See you at the meeting
on Thursday!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Best wishes,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Erika<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
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Augustsson</span></b><span
style="color:#232323;mso-fareast-language:SV"> | Research
Assistant<br>
Aging Research Center | Karolinska Institutet<br>
Tomtebodavägen 18a | 171 65 Solna, Sweden<br>
08-524 881 65 | 0730 845 391<br>
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