[Futuregen] Review/scoping article to read through

[Susan Phillips]

Hi Erika,

Great to see this paper emerging at last. I have only read the abstract and intro. I think that the message is hard to extract because of the language used. Your spoken English is flawless but the writing seems to use phrases that I suspect are perfect in Swedish but not so in English. I will attach the edits I have made so far.

Before I go on editing - I am wondering if there is someone at the Karolinska who reads manuscripts and edits for English usage. I know that at Umea University they had such people and the were extremely helpful. It might be worth taking this to them before I/we continue
 editing.

As I write this I am thinking how totally incapable I am of writing in another language and am somewhat in awe of the abilities of everyone else in FUTUREGEN who can read, write and speak multiple languages!

Susan
On Dec 2, 2021, at 11:25 AM, Erika Augustsson <erika.augustsson at ki.se<mailto:erika.augustsson at ki.se>> wrote:

Dear all,

Hope you’re doing well in the cold!
We have an updated version of the review/scoping article which is basically ready to send in. We just wanted to run it by you in case you spot any glaring issues, hopefully all looks good though! We are hoping to send it in to Ageing & Society very soon, so if you have time to read by next Friday that would be amazing.

Best wishes,
Erika


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